Wednesday 15 November 2006

Spider's Web Poems



The Spider’s Dwelling

The spider toils for weeks making his wonderful web

It curls around like a whirlpool sucking the
Flies and moths into its beauty

It is delicate and precious like jewelry

Pearls sprinkle down upon it as dew drops form in The early morning mist

At last it is night and it glows brightly

Like a luminous necklace

A small child breaks it

Now the spider must start again
Natalie
The Spider’s Web

The spider waits in his comfy armchair for a new rival to stick to his web

A diamond necklace gleaming as the sun shone down

It’s like a whirlpool

Hung like the sun in the watery blue sky

It dangles from leaf to leaf

A fine thread of silk made like a work of art

The wind blows the web away and the spider starts all over again
Abbie
The Spider’s Web

The droplets on the web look like beads on a necklace

The web sparkles in the sun

The web is used for catching flies or maybe even

A little surprise!

Amy
The Spider’s Web

The spider’s web is like a laced beaded curtain

It quivers dangerously as the wind blows

The spider hangs on for dear life as it weaves its shiny silk crystal cloth

Flies are fooled into the lacey deathtrap

They await the spider

As they know their lives are gone

How many more lives will be destroyed?

Becky
The Spider’s Web

The long thin delicate web

Hangs from tree to tree

Along comes the small slow black spider

Crawling on the silky string

Whirling it around

Finishing the silver web

Chelsea
The Spider’s Web

The web looks like the glowing sun

So delicate with silver diamonds

It shimmers with the wind

It dangles like a bird flying through the air

The spider clings to his web

Awaiting its next tasty meal

It could be you!

Chloe
The Spider’s Web

The beads of dew trickle

As the radiant sun awakens

It shines on the web

It sparkles like stars in the night sky

The delicate threads of beads

Gently sways in the wind

On the sleepy bushes

But where is the spider?

Danielle
The Spider’s Web

A catching spinning cobweb

That tickles like a feather and all of a sudden it changes like the weather

A crawling little spider that runs across the web

He runs this way and that way

And then he goes to bed!

Daniel
The Spider’s Web

It twinkles in the twilight

Waterproof sequins shimmer like diamonds

Silver-threaded lattice allowing mirror-like reflections, that pass through the see-through mansion

Diamond pearls sparkle like glitter in the sunlight

The delicately patterned flycatcher drips

Dew clings on the sticky fragile web

As it glistens in the radiant sun

Danielle
The Spider’s Web

A netted deathtrap for confused flies

A lacy embroidered bouncy trampoline

A sparkling hidden spring ready to uncoil

Carefully woven between sticks and leaves

Invisible to the human eye

The trap stays camouflaged

But soon it hangs with glimmering crystals

Darcy
The Spider’s Web

I see dew drops like glistening diamonds

Crisscrossed lines of lattice sways in the breeze

It’s like beaded gems hanging from laced net

Spiders draw the flies into their trap waiting to pounce

Woven silk hangs from the sparkling trees

Dominique
The Spider’s Web

Silver jewels grip on the web

Glowing lace covered in glitter

Stainless steel silky smooth

A whirlpool of desire

Whipping from side to side

The spider sways from left to right

A never ending spiral

A spider’s web

Jack
The Spider’s Web

A sparkling thread that glistens in the sun

Jewels hanging down off it’s surface like ice crystals

This beautiful designs betrays it’s purpose

The insect graveyard is home to the spider

The web is torn by it’s meal and patiently it starts again

Joel
The Spider’s Web

The toiling spiders sacrifice their delicate, stunning webs for the monster moths

Silky spirals twist around the sleeping bush

Crystal drops like diamonds on a glittering ring

Delicate wisps hanging freely

Sprinkled in dew drops

Gripping onto the pearly spirals of beauty.

Katana
The Spider’s Web

The spider web was hanging from an old, broken branch

The lazy, old spider was sitting on his web when suddenly he sneezed and flew off his sparkly web,

The raindrops shining on the web fell down and splashed on the spider’s head.

Kelly
The Spider’s Web

The web holds tight to the ivy on the wall

Every time the wind blows it looks like the web is breathing

Death trap for flies

One silky thread like a violin string, Twang

A fly is trapped

The web gets it’s catch

Tender diamonds of prey.

Levi
The Spider’s Web

Hanging like a crystal chandelier

Beautiful beaded strings

So lacey and delicate

But in reality a spiteful cruel deathtrap

Attached to branches and dark gloomy corners waiting for its prey

Lucy
The Spider’s Web

The web swings in the breeze like an acrobat’s line

Like a fisherman’s net waiting for a catch

Like a spiraling whirlpool in a vast sea of leaves

It is the net of no return

The Mona Lisa of the hedgerow

It is as delicate as a snowflake in Winter

The insect graveyard

Matthew
The Spider’s Web

The transparent web glistening and glossy in the sun

It shines like beaded jewelry

Polished diamonds twinkling like stars in the sky

The spider spins his web like a cloth of wondrous thread

Sparkling jewels catching dreams

Mia
The Spider’s Web

The delicate beaded web springs slowly up and down

Dew drops like diamonds clasped to the lace

Soft threads made from transparent strands

In the cold wind the web slowly swings from side to side

As the lace swings it makes a swooshing sound

Singing a lullaby to unsuspecting flies

Molly
The Spider’s Dwelling

The spider toils for weeks making his wonderful web

It curls around like a whirlpool sucking the
Flies and moths into its beauty

It is delicate and precious like jewelry

Pearls sprinkle down upon it as dew drops form in The early morning mist

At last it is night and it glows brightly

Like a luminous necklace

A small child breaks it

Now the spider must start again

Natalie
The Spider’s Web

Sticky, sticky, sticky

Lots of silver lines

Stretching along the branches

Up the spider climbs

To where the fly is stuck

It must be dinner time!

Rachel
The Spider’s Web

When the springy web gets moved by the wind

It bounces like a pogo stick

The drops of diamondy dew

Make the web sparkle like silver and gold

The best fly catcher ever

Worth more than money could buy.

Reice
The Spider’s Web

The cinnamon brown spider spins a sleek and velvety thread
The thread hangs lifelessly onto the spiky leaved bushes and the stone cold wall filling the crevice
between them
The drops of diamond dew hang like clothes on a washing line
The fragile and delicate web waves like a sail
The web glimmers and shines in the bright morning sun
A fly is wrapped like a Christmas present
The web sticks to anything it touches
As a twig falls the web suddenly SNAPS
Now the spider will have to revive its work

Thomas
The Spider's Web
The lacey, shining web suspended beneath the tree
The delicate, beaded cotton
Crystal clear in the morning light ready to catch it's prey
Woven into a crystal chandelier
Rachel

19 comments:

Aycliffe Drive Bloggers said...

Well done all of you, your work is imaginative and creative.

katana said...

We all think that we tried really hard on these poems and we would all like to thank Mrs.Laing for her time and support.

Becky & Dominique said...

Everyone Read Our Poems
There the best
It's a very good lesson

Love Ya
Becky xxxxxxxxxxxxx

J Cole said...

Excellent poems you can tell a lot of thought has gone in to them,well done and keep up the good work

mdelmar said...

molly said...
for people who are english
fanatics this websites great.
thanks for Mrs.Laings hard work
our poems are absulutely great.

sonia belador said...

I was looking for spider web poems on the internet to show to my class for some examples. I am a teacher and my class was writing some spider web poems and I thought these were brilliant so I have shown them to my class and they thought they were great too. I hope my class do as good a poem as you!

sonia belador said...

I love these! Good work! you have used a lot of description these poems are brilliant.

natalie said...

thank you Mrs Laing for all your support and help I hope that you will carry this on next year.
From Natalie
xxx

rugbyboyjack said...

this is class im on the INTERNET
=)
Hi everybody hi Levi its me JACK
hi Becky ill be in school tomorrow to annoy you
oh back to the point
these are great poems
THANK YOU MISS LAING!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Extreamly good poems i loved beckys

Anonymous said...

hey yo dued cool,great,awsome,ace,amazing,mind boggling POEMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANKS MISSES LAING COULDNT HAVE DONE IT WITHOUT YOU.

Anonymous said...

I AM VERY IMPRESSED

Sophie said...

I like all of your poems they are great looking forward to seeing my work on the website Sophie

chloe said...

I think most of the poems + storys are pretty good I can't wait until I see mine on there

See Ya
love chloe

Anonymous said...

Well done G&T buddies you have worked really hard on these poems.
Keep checking for more great stuff!!!

from
Lucy Parr

Anonymous said...

Absoloutly astonishing amazing work i think you and your class have put a lot of very hard work and patience and commitment to be this good you all deserve a pat on the back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations Mrs laing for running this amazing G&T class for several years now and i know most of you hate the extra homework cause i have been there myself but it sets you up for next year good luck

(by the way hemel is an amazing school like aycliffe)

Sam said...

I am extremely impressed by the poems my nephew and his class mates have written. A very special mention to Reece Cooper whos poems i enjoyed very much. Keep up the good work. Auntie Sam x

Nan Thompson said...

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm very impressed! I was looking for spider poems and this is better than most of the others on the web.
I couldn't believe that the kids were only 5.6.7th level. You are doing a great job, Mrs. Laing. Want to move to the States? They sure could use you. Nan Thompson, Baltimore, MD www.NansAlchemy.com

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